My First Script

I recently started writing a script for a short film I want to make. Since I know there are a lot of horror fans on here I wanted to get some opinions.

It’s based on a dream I had a few years ago while my bathroom was getting renovated. The sounds of the drills and hammers gave me wild dreams. One of which was about a lineage of serial killers; A tradition passed down to the men in the family for generations. The first born son would take on the role so his father could retire when he turned 18. However, in my short film, the MC would be very against this inheritance. He’s a sensitive kid with a lot of empathy, something the past generations lacked.

If I were to produce this short film and put it on my YouTube, would anything watch it?