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I posted pictures. Not to shock- but to speak. A finger g*n to my temple, blood-red lipstick smeared like silence, eyeliner drawn too thick to miss. They called it attention seeking. But what's so wrong with seeking attention when you've been invisible your whole life? I shared c*ts, captions soaked in sadness, because pain without witness is just another secret to bury. I was screaming in digital ink. Testing the world: "if I bleed in pixels, will anyone care?" Not for likes- for life. For proof that I wasn't alone. For someone, anyone to type back: "I see you."
attention?
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Vesper Vile
it's giving ChatGPT on a 'sad girl Tumblr circa 2014' moodboard . the speech pattern and wording is something only ai can generate . and all of your "poems" have the exact same predictable cadence .
idk what kind of weirdo sees a pattern in a stranger's work and checks it for AI or something. let's be real: u just want a reason to hate.
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experiment with rhythm and structure and try grounding your emotions in specific imagery or scenes. the way all of them are so similarly structured reads like ai. try playing with words and meanings, double entendres, etc. read more poetry and practice with elements you like
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thank u for the advice homie
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Facq
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glad u had so much to say. thanx for reading
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