My first poem (pls give advice)

As my hand reached for yours, it slipped straight through your fingers,

You are untouchable, unlovable,

Yet I try and try again until my hand feels numb,

I reach for your face, 

The one I’ve thought about again and again,

The face I have memorised down to every freckle,

I get lost in your transparency.

Whatever I do, I can't touch you,

Nothing I do will affect you,

But you still act like nothing is wrong,

Suddenly, I'm the transparent one.

I'm the one who can't touch you,

I'm the one who can't love you enough to touch you.