So I want to make a song right? (Help)

This is what ive thought of so far.. (i want it kinda scemo)

Title: “Ghost in the Mirror (Bleed Me Out)”

[Verse 1]
I carved your name into my wristwatch,
So I'd never lose the time you left.
You kissed me like a funeral hymn,
Now I wear your silence like death.

I lit a cigarette just to feel the burn,
Hoping pain would make you real.
But the ash just fell like snowfall,
And none of this helps me heal.

[Pre-Chorus]
I scream your name into static air,
But all I hear is cold despair.

[Chorus]
Bleed me out in black and red,
You're the voice inside my head.
You're the scream behind my smile,
The poison dressed in style.
Shattered glass, mascara tears,
I still see you after all these years.
You're the ghost in the mirror I can't fight—
Just staring back, night after night.

[Verse 2]
Your photograph bleeds into my wall,
Like ink that won't let go.
I play our song in minor keys,
But it only makes me hollow.

I swallowed every “I’m okay,”
Like knives dipped in regret.
But nothing ever cuts as deep
As the things we never said.

[Pre-Chorus]
The stars don’t shine, they just watch me drown,
You built me up just to burn me down.

[Chorus]
Bleed me out in black and red,
You're the voice inside my head.
You're the scream behind my smile,
The poison dressed in style.
Shattered glass, mascara tears,
I still see you after all these years.
You're the ghost in the mirror I can't fight—
You're the grave I kiss goodnight.

[Bridge]
I sleepwalk through your afterglow,
Digging graves in my shadow.
My veins spell out your lullaby,
As I laugh, then beg, then cry.

[Final Chorus]
Bleed me out in black and red,
This love was better left for dead.
You're the noose around my youth,
The lie I loved like truth.
Mirror cracked, soul decayed,
You’re the price I always paid.
You're the ghost I let inside—
Now you're the reason I’ve died…
...every night.