Heyo, just one of my favorite poems that I've written and was looking for any critiques.
All around the flames waltzed to his cruel tune
His steps, cloven-footed, dance in thick blood
I should’ve listened to the augury
My mind hagridden, I drop with a thud
Dress once pure, now tainted in heathen’s gore
His hooves clattered mockingly near my form
A coward I’ve become, brave nevermore
I ought to be shamed for bringing this storm
Blistered by greed, I summoned this damned beast
Slaughtering a coven to quench his thirst
Memories rot, friends once close now deceased
This jealousy wove my soul to a curse
With his silk-tongued words, I became convinced
Hand outstretched, his Faustian waltz commenced
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