poem/song lyrics im working on pls give feedback

falling over eachother like dominios, healing you first empty myself pour me out im all yours.

 engulfed in your smoke ill breath in it, unlock the door baby let me in. we share the same soul, eyes,heart and body. anything you want love promise iv got it.

  i exist in your shadow my smile ends where yours starts.

 baby please give in please give me your heart.


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desiaology

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WOAHH this is rlly good! Music is poetry i mean u dont have to obsess over it but i’d def recommend like looking into poetry techniques for inspo!


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