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he sat alone, under a dim light like a ghost among the living
the world moved on without him, it always had
he lit a cigarette, he watched the smoke vanish like meaning
he wasn't lonely, he told himself, just tired
so he smiled, as if nothing hurt, as if everything were okay
as if he hadn't already disappeared, like the stars after day
(I don't know what to name this, i'm thinking about 'dim' or 'numb')
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joseph
very good! 2 kudos
ty!! ^^
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tiff x3
waitwait peak?? o.o
tysm and sorry for not replying sooner
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hehe no worriesss!!
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Sunday_down
How cool >_< ,nice poem aand plus i have to say why would you want to name it "dim" or "numb"?
idk tbh but the reason why im deciding on 'dim' is because of the first sentence lmao
also ty!!
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Nice dude niceee
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