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you're like my warped reflection,
in a mirror that i'm moving away from,
but i'd still say you're stunning,
maybe even charming,
you know this already,
but i thought i'd say it anyway,
you've got me wrapped around your finger,
you pour me poison so i'll linger
what do u guys thinkย
trying to take inspo from Pete Wentz/Ryan Ross writing style
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good read
ty!
by madeliefx; ; Report
Chomper
good language and visuals, shows off a very specific style and aesthetic within the descriptions.
maybe just work on the actual message, its not super clear what the lyrics mean and how one can move away but also linger?
The words are there and the choice is vocab is fab its just what those words sum up to yk.
yeah you're so right, tysm for the feedback! much appreciated xD
by madeliefx; ; Report
np! I dig your style btw!
by Chomper; ; Report
aww tysm! ive got a lot of improving to do but thats so kind lol
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