THE SONG IS FINISHED LISTEN TO IT!!!

this took so long to make, its called: it shouldn't take this long in miles to say "i love you". it was supposed to be a post hardcore song but it turned out more pop punk but its like paramore type  pop punk so its good. the songs about a long distance relationship i was in last year but yea, heres the link to go listen to it: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ePtz3tF0V2M

PLEASE TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK ABT IT!!!

heres the lyrics: 

verse1:

your gone,

but this time its best for the both of us.

we cant pretend anymore,

the farthest i can go is to the door.

prechorus1:

i know you, you saw it,

more time was never promised,

it was fun while it lasted,

did you ever think our fingers would touch.

chorus:

ohhhh, she's gone again

bittersweet lust go back to your den.

it'd take years just to crawl out the screen,

cuz that's when our cut backs are finally free and,

ohhhh, its gone again

bittersweet lust ill face your offense.

say your goodbyes, it was hard for me too,

not for a while i wont do this again.

verse2:

if we stayed like that,

would it last, till our eyes interlocked ohhh.

but you made me feel like, so much more.

chorus:

ohhhh, she's gone again

bittersweet lust go back to your den.

it'd take years just to crawl out the screen,

cuz that's when our cut backs are finally free and,

ohhhh, its gone again,

bittersweet lust ill face your offense.

say your goodbyes, it was hard for me too,

not for a while i wont do this again.

breakdown:

BURN THIS PLACE DOWN!!!!!

outro:

OH YEA!!!!!

i knew it, i saw it,

more time was never promised,

kissing me though the screen,

that's how you know that this shouldn't be at all.