I'm trying to make a song inspired by They Both Die At The End

It's not in order, just some random ideas i had, also, it is a ballad inspired by Your Song by Elton John, the song Mateo sings in the book

If I could give you everything

Trust me, I'd do it

But I can't, so all I'm gonna give you is this dance

If we had more time, we could go a bit slow

But boy we don't 

So we are going to dance today

Since the time I met you

Not too long ago

I've started thinking 

I'll miss you when you go

Still under the circumstances 

I wouldn't have it any other way

Well, maybe if we had more time

A house and two nice guys 

We could live happily, but still the end would be the same

The luckiest losers, you and I

Give me the first and last chance

Tonight we both should dance

Because tomorrow we won't 

So give me the last dance today

ideas and suggestions are very appreciated !!!!!!!!!! And feel free to text me what you think of it! also, i wanted to write it as a duet, but I dont think i have the capacitibliy to do it alone :(