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"When the Sky is Quiet"
When the sky forgets to speak,
I listen harder-
To the whispers of leaves,
To the hush between raindrops,
To the sun touching my skin like it remembers all of me.
I only look up at the sky,
And something in me breaks-
Not in pain, but in softness.
I cry because I feel safe,
Because nature doesn't ask why.
It just holds me quietly.
And maybe that's enough, maybe that's love.
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"The Whispers of My World"
I stand still, watching the sky's wideness,
And I feel the air that carries the stories of the earth.
There's something in the way the leaves move,
A quiet understanding I can't put into words.
I don't need to speak;
The world says enough,
In every rustle, every shadow, every star.
And for once, I feel like I belong
In the simplest of moments,
And the world then becomes my world.
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I know these are not too good, but please, don't judge. I'm not a professional!!
Oh, and I wrote these poems based on this connection I have with nature, which I guess is obvious from the poems. I hope you like them:)
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pepprmoth83
beautiful <3 you capture the holiness of the earth perfectly. it cradles us, keeps us. you are a wonderful poet <3
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it
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by Jaismeen<3; ; Report
ᴇTH☆N
Woajjj this is super awesome! The writing is really professional, and I love the topics! Very pretty poems ( ⊃🌹⊂ )
Thank you so much
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ickyheat
such a great poem!! in fact this is the best poem ive read in a while. ur writing is rlly clear and thorough. keep it up, i would love to read more of these, and also post this on reddit it'll make numbers
Thank you so much!! I'm glad you liked it. Oh, and I'll definitely give the reddit thing some thought, THANKS 🥹✨
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vaibhu
Oh my god , they are really professional, I mean I'm envious that I'm not the one who wrote them. And mostly importantly in a world where poetry has gotten limited to love , i struggle to find someone who writes poetry about nature like me. But really really wonderful work
THANK YOU SO MUCH<33!! It means a lot to me that YOU (who write such great poems yourself) praised me
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Pawloaf
I dont read poems much but THESE.. THESE are soooo good.. I cant praise them enough. It feels like an insult to not get them published sooner...
OH MY GOD, that's so sweet of you. THANK YOU SO MUCH
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