Made a New song:)))

I made this new song the other day:) it's a shoegaze type of song the quality isn't the best cause i made it on my phone using bandlab!! This time it's a collab with a friend

Could i get some feedback? 

                                                  copy paste the link :3

ytb link:https://youtu.be/VZZBiEPBsR0?si=5fpZV_QjprEIXUxm

soundcloud: https://soundcloud.com/user-964614029-486755895/leaving-me-ft-davmon?si=296fd8a40c9a482fb17746f80e8f9bb6&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

 also ig any one wants to do music together dm mee

xoxo