"charles bukowoski" poem by me

Was looking through my notes app from this year on my school laptop most of it was just boring math or homework shit, but then i found this poem i completely forgot about writing, thought it was good enough to share :p tell me whatcha think <33 

'charles is a strange man , a sad old man , he wanders around humming a tune with no melody. he speaks, need he much more ? 

Such a muted voice , he drifts about , drifting through the road , riding a machine gun bred just for murder , brought to life just for toeture , The thought of traveling so far for someone , just to be paid to travel further , 'why wouldnt you atleast take me the rest of the way with ya, i dont weight much i wont slow the car down JUST PLEASE MAN LET ME IN.' damn you damn me. Damned bukowoski.