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Mother, forgive me for my lost hope
But as world moves on, I only wish to go
Far away from here, into vibrant blue skies
Mother, oh forgive me, but my demise has come
Mama, my beloved, thank you for comfort
But my heart is breaking into pieces now
Shaking, trembling, crying; I tried to move on
But giving up seemed like an option I’d own
Mom, please hold me, before I have to go
I wanted love, affection, that’s all I’d ask for
Motherly love you gave me, was all I ever had
Despite any frustration, you were there when I moved on
Mother, mama, mom and my guardian angel
You were there to help, but I can’t simply take it
The ropes are tightening around my throat and my wrists
My pulse was all I could ever hear
My heart is trembling and so am I
But you stand there, and unfortunately
I can’t hear your lullaby
It’s all muted by the pulse and the pain
I’m sorry, Mother, but it’s time for my fate
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twinklelore
This piece pierced straight through the soul, your words carry such raw emotion, vulnerability, and poetic honesty that it's impossible not to feel the weight of each line, the ache behind every plea to a mother who clearly meant everything to you, and the way you wove different forms of “mother” throughout the stanzas gave it both a universal and deeply personal touch, like a cry that echoes in silence yet reaches anyone who has ever needed to be held just a little tighter, your writing isn’t just beautiful, it’s brave, and I want you to know that even in the heaviest moments, there’s profound strength in expressing pain like this through poetry, it's a form of survival, of reaching out, and in that reaching, you’ve touched something real, you should be incredibly proud of this piece, because it doesn’t just speak, it feels, and that is the mark of a true writer.
Thank you so much! Usually I get inspired by certain pieces of music, and just bump everything into a Gdoc. I wrote this one from heart.
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