a poem i wrote! :3

a few weeks ago i started writing some poems, without knowledge- because they don’t teach stuff like that at school TvT so i tried by my own so i hope they’re okay!!


I spit the venom, black and raw,

A howl against what no eyes saw.

My fists are storms, my my breath a flame,

But still, I never speak its name.


It writhes beneath my bitter skin,

A beast without, a rot within.

Each word I scream, each blow I land—

It slips like smoke right through my hand.


And still I strike, and still I burn,

For peace is something I won’t earn.

Not while this thing I cannot see

Keeps feeding all the hate in me.


THAT’S IT ITS MY FIRST POST IM ACTUALLY NERVOUS :c


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r0ttenballz

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I feel like a lot of hobby poets nowadays, especially what u see on social media, rather sound like diary entries that don't even have a meter anymore- unlike yours! very nice!! :)


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amelie ꩜

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OMAGAWD ITS SO COOL AHHHH!!!


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