Need help for my Story Trouble Kids

I am creating this story about these trouble Kids. Kevin, William, Dawn and Bridget. 

But the thing is. I can't decide the plot. I want them to kind of meet up in a breakfast club kind of way. But its not set in stone.  I have written some plots. But none of them seem to really stick. 

If anyone would like to share their opinions that would be great. 

Here are some plots I have made. 

Plot One: They all end up going to the same abandoned place. (Maybe at the start or they find each other in the building through fear. ((supernatural)).) They end up arriving/finding this mysterious room. (Haven't figure it out after that)

Plot Two: They go into a abandoned place and end up arriving into this liminal space, place. (Like the movie Time Trap and the Netflix series Pending Train) And they need to escape

Plot Three: They are all from a different era going to the same abandoned place that somehow allows them to all meet each other. (Only have half of Plot three)


Some details you must know about my kids. 

They are all abused. (Loosely based on my abuse and other abuse from people I know) 

Kevin is 14yd-jock/bully

William is 13yd- nerd/geek

Dawn is 13yd-"popular" kid

Bridget is 12yd- weird kid.

Any help for either the plots I came up with (even if its half assed) or even your own plots would be greatly appreciated. I wont steal the plots completely I will be grabbing and dissecting it. Molding it to be mine. 

also P.S I'm dubbing them as trouble kids but the series wont be called Trouble kids.


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Maybe you can do something like, one of them is secretly a type of spirit that's locked in earth, and he need help to get to the other world, cause he was killed by a serial killer that nobody knows who he is, and only the kids can help him with that, idk


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