trying out poetry 。𖦹°‧

hiiii :D i've never posted poetry on here before, but theres a first time for everything hehehe. i wrote this back in october/november of last year, for my english class. the assignment was to write a riddle poem like they did in the middle ages, where you had to use figurative language & imagery to describe something without explicitly saying what it was, so the audience had to guess :3

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She’s an older woman, taller than I am.

Brightest sight in January,

sweetest scent of spring.

Long limbs like weathered leather, but

always carefully manicured.

She holds a champagne bottle

parasol

that rustles in the breeze.


Sometimes a nuisance, but kinder than I am.

Dropping Spanish gold into the streets,

only for it to be kicked around.

Her knobbly labor is opened up

and easily pulled apart into

pure honeyed segments.

She lends me her parasol

on our summer afternoon strolls.


I miss her when she leaves.

Her shoes still lie stubbornly in the grass.


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꧁𝒱𝒾𝒸𝓉ℴ𝓇𝓎꧂

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I don't know how I've never seen this before but I love it sm. It's not easy to write a personification poem, you're really talented!


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oh my gosh thank you! you're making my day :-D

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hehe npp! <3

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Rainyygirl

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she is a nurse? hmmm but she could also be a mom, or a sister.... hmmmm


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she is an orange tree :-D the professor wanted us to try using literary devices so i played around w personification

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this is so good!! (*´∀`)


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