A poem- papercuts

An old, crisp, notebook 

Barely even used

Bound to be ruined by hook or by crook

For amusement it grows bruised 


The notebook begins to tear itself 

It's spine can't hold it's papers in

Too tattered to be displayed hidden on a shelf 

No one writes anymore 

Oh how long it's been


It's pages stained with tears

All it's pages torn

The scars remain for years 

About to be thrown away,

A notebook nobody would mourn


Until a soul so kind and sweet found a notebook ruined

Covered it's tears with tape

And put together the spine

The kind man took the notebook and said 

"I don't care if it's ruined, it's mine"


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That really struck a chord with me, wow ! That's a beautiful reflection on how sometimes the most meaningful relationships/moments/connections come from embracing what others might overlook or discard. I really love how there is a clear structure: Starting with Neglect and Abandonment (something or someone neglected and forgotten over time, ie the notebook) -- Loss and Pain (tears and scars on the notebook; almost how past trauma can leave lasting marks) -- Rescue and Redemption (a kind person finds and repairs the notebook, symbolising compassion and acceptance of brokenness, valuing it despite its flaws) -- Value in Imperfection (embracing the ruined notebook; accepting and caring for things/people as they are).


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