First page of comic

If you read my profile you will know that my dream is to work on my own indie show well i've decided that before making it a show I should make it a comic to have something to base it on and work on my art to get better but i've realised you cant really see the words so i've decided to ink in all the pages digitally for better viewing so i'll add the inked in version later 

(UPDATE: finished sorry its basically a glorified storyboard.)