I need help with plot, pls

Do you think it's good idea if main character thinks(he didn't see the death, he just thinks like that)that the other one is dead(so the reader thinks that too) and after while it turns out that he is alive? And in the end that character dies once again, but this time for real?? What do you think?

Pls help me<3


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if the execution is good and it makes sense then it could be cool yes


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it would be a good plot :)


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