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Eclipse (a poem i thought i cooked but makes not much sense lol)

The earth the moon and the sun are friends but sometimes the earth feels like the third wheel because of the moon covering the sun Making a Eclipse form.  

(written on 28 of desember 2023 at 9pm)


i honestly just want to share it because its spacehey lol and i want it a somewhere in a safe place. :)


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TheStrangestOfMen

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I know my poems and this aint one of them sorry


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I knew it! and thanks for the honesty!:)

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I see potential tho, keep following your passion, the fact that you have energy to write is already a great start

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@gecko.s_here

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WOW! What a cool poem!!


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