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unloved.

he reached for warmth with trembling hands,
but the sun only burned.

a child born with an open heart,
left to wander through a world of stone,
where love was something glimpsed, never held,
a distant light fading in cold air.

he longed to be touched, to be seen,
to hear his name spoken softly,
but the wind only howled his loneliness back at him.

he watched others bask in the glow,
felt the ache of an embrace he would never know,
and still, he reached,
and still, he burned.

better to be scarred by longing than to live untouched.
better to chase love, even if it will never be his.

for what is a heart if not a wound that never heals?


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mellowdryaa☆

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thank you, i love it.


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actually, how are you so good?? 'reached for the warmth of the sun but the sun only burned'?? when the person is supposed to light up his world but only scars him with the light they shined
'the wind only howled his loneliness back at him' he is so unloved that not even the wind could be gentle. 'what is a heart if not a wound that do not heal' undescribeable. i think i am your fan now

by mellowdryaa☆; ; Report

i used to write quite a lot back when i used to be in school and i still write analysis on many things that intrigue me, another was just reading a lot in general. i take a lot of inspiration from Yukio Mishima.

by enigma; ; Report

interesting, i will be making some research about yukio mishima bcs i want to be good at writing poet like u

by mellowdryaa☆; ; Report

his works are really good and are full of emotion, his history is pretty complicated though.

by enigma; ; Report

i just watched his history and yeah it really is kinda complicated and i am not really satisfied with the reason he is dead, but his work is reallyyy good

by mellowdryaa☆; ; Report

but since I a not advance at english yet, i have difficulty understanding some words T-T

by mellowdryaa☆; ; Report

just gotta separate the art from the artist when it comes to mishima

by enigma; ; Report

AHAHHAHA YES

by mellowdryaa☆; ; Report