a poem i wrote (hope you all like it :))

Hii first of all im not so good at this and im a newbie in writing poems so please rate it

A pollen in a breeze

Is the reason for my sneeze

It shows that nature is growing

Her beauty slowly showing

Bumblebees are humming

Their music is so stunning

Sunbeams are tickling my heart

I can truly feel her warmth

Mother Nature is here now

The Sun is standing in the south

My dear old friend the spring

Brings my soul to sing

i hope its not weird or so please give me feedback that would be sooooo cool from you all and i hope the ending sounds okay

Bye love you all soooooo much <3

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TripleK

Very lovely spring poem <3

aww thank you

Mercury ^_^

I LOVE ITTT!!!! always love when you write poems bro <3

awwww thank youu <3