First poem I’ve ever shared publicly —-> Falling Asleep

Falling asleep,

The idea isn’t bad.

It’s doing that drives me mad.


It’s so hard to do,

I toss and turn trying to find the perfect spot.

“Why’s this so hard?” I thought.


I counted sheep,

Closed my eyes,

But I still lie awake as time flies.


I give up and relax.

I stare at my ceiling,

The silence of the night was actually quite sooting.


I felt myself doze away.

I finally felt alright.

Well… Goodnight!


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R0ckn_4ng3L

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This is so good, and it’s crazy how I have to write a poem in my creative writing class but I Love this!!<3


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