My Horrendous Attempt at a poem!

My skin opened up like a  flower

Your sins visible on my skin

The lack of aneurin hurts

My ribs sulk in pain

Perhaps because there's no gain

Its eating me from inside out

It stands behind me as it peeps

As I lay in bed it creeps

I should just sleep.


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Shin

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THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL WHAT? Makes me wanna post my own poems on here but I could never write like this :O


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YOUR SO SWEET<33
I'm sure you make lovely poemss!!

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