what do you guys think of my poetry! i would loooove some feedback/comments!

Hey all, 

>>i've been writing poetry for quite a while but I never share it with anyone, because well, honestly i'm scared that it's not good or people with judge me.

>>but i think it's time to put myself out there!

>>please let me know what I could do better or what I'm doing well!

>>These are very short poems that I have gathered over the years! Some are also song lyrics.

Thank you cuties! Much love xoxo

>>>>>Poem 1

In the big garden where wishes grow

When they ripen

I stare at them, completely in love

Danger is love

I'm sorry my dear wish

I have caught you again

Floating in the endless wind

All those times I had you

I wished for beauty and I wished for love

When I should've wished for forgiveness

>>>>>Poem 2 - 'Late in November'

Late in Novemeber I saw the corpses of the trees

I woke up and saw bruises on my knees

My hands are cold like ice but the sky is like a fire

I wish I remembered your voice

My thoughts are racing, I'm lying in my bed

The harshness doesn't compare to the crown of thoughts in your head

Two knifes clashing like a car crash in the road

[the piece of paper was torn away here and the poem was left unfinished :((, a shame because I really liked this one ]

>>>>>Poem 3 - Or maybe song lyrics

One drowned in the sea, oh hold, sweet angel

My star return to me, hold on, sweet angel

Heart like a box, inside, oh my angel

One sweet voice comes, oh she's my angel

For me

>>>>>Poem 4 - Or maybe song lyrics 'Mermaid Song'

Why does the sun make you look beautiful?

And why does it make you sad?

Stand in the water,

Your beauty drowned with you

I see you standing there

The sun dancing in your golden hair

What I'd give to be loved by you, by you

Sunset sparkles on the waves embracing you

Hand white like a dove reaches out, but your skin is turning blue

I see you standing there

The sun dancing in your golden hair

What I'd give to be loved by you, by you.