writing something short- very bad draft

WRITING. 

so, hi . if you know me irl/ or if we're close online please do not mention this i will die of embarrassment (unless your gonna shower me with praise <3)

guide

few characters have names

the main names r 

ciro - pronounced like see arrow

soleil - soul lee lee 

fantasy land

may b confusing but bare w me..  wrote this quick so its kinda sucky i promise im good

SCENE HEHE

"why do they do that?" soleil finally broke the silence, it was quiet after, like she hadn't of said anything at all. maybe it would've been better not to speak. 

The grass was cold, and soft, tickling her back from the slight opening in her nightgown, before, she was scolding herself for not slipping something else on, a real dress or at least a damn coat. now? all she could focus on was the everlasting silence. the moon was bright, not as bright as the stars, and not as pretty as them either. 

the grass curled over her slender fingers, pulling them down to the dirt, soleil would move her fingers ever so often, dirt coating the underneath of her nails. 

she glanced over, moving her head over a bit to look at ciro's face. she couldnt read the expression on his face-- she never could, he wasnt as open as her. god, how she wished he was. maybe she'd finally be able to know what was wrong, or maybe why he dragged her out her. 

"why do they shine like that, i mean." soleil spoke again, feeling slightly idiotic at attempting to get ciro to talk again.. and about the damn stars, out of anything. 

"why does anything do anything?" ciro finally muttered, not glancing a soleil. his eyes strictly trained on one star.

"that doesnt make sense" soleil responded, sighing. ciro wouldnt speak again, and theyd end the night by her getting tired of his shit, again. she'd leave him, again.

"nothing makes sense" 

that.. shocked soleil, and set her off. of all things, he says the dumbest shit. 

"you're an idiot". Ciro sat up, and soleil, feeling uncomfortable by being below him, sat up as well, both their backs against the bark of the old evara tree. hearing the sad groan from it, the ground moved as the evara's roots shifted. 

"I think its because of the pierce" Ciro said after a moment, moving his eyes to soleil, a race in his chest when she looked back at him. "what?" .. from the new found closeness, ciro could easily smell soleil, her perfume she got from yara, the one she wears religiously, her breath as well. the strawberries he saw her eating at dinner still lingering on her tongue.

It took a moment for him to remember he had a question to answer- his mind clouded with that perfume scent. "The stars" he answered, his voice wavering a bit, hoping soleil figured it was from the coldness.

THATS ALL I HAVE FOLKS

DID YOU LIKE IT

PLEASE

anyway some after details for you . yes, everything in this book is alive, from the grass, to the trees, everything. minus food and objects.. i mean like nature wise LOL

yes the evara tree breathes.. 

and this is based in a SCHOOL . boarding school yes ytes eysyysysys

the book is called cherathian.. -share a then a in- really fast 

i love those two.. 

i love the thought of the male L/I being completly whipped yk?? its perf

 ANYWAY THANK YOU FOR READING :) if u liked it please lmk so i have power to make the whole book.. 

i may js do oneshoots of it for awhile tbh so js a warning that whole section may not be in the book !!!!!!!!

anyway smooch ily