heyy i just wanted to share some of the things i write when im bored hah. i wrote this like weeks ago and i wasnt feeling sad or anything i just wanted to write something and this was the result! there's no context btw
"She curled up in his arms, sobs choking her words and breathing becoming harder. Tears streaked her pink cheeks and her body shook, trying to find something to hold on to. She let out loud sobs of pain, like the cry of a mother who lost her children. Her throat began to itch, her head began to ache, and soon her eyes dried up, not letting another tear fall. She stared at a fixed point, trying to keep her breathing at a normal pace. Soon she began to notice the hand tangled in her hair trying to calm her down. She closed her eyes and relaxed her face, sinking into that feeling."
ikk its short but oh well. probably ill be publishing more of my writings like this or sm. also this a translation of the original cause the original its in spanish but if you want me to publish it too just tell me!!
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criostoir ('-' )
This is really good! You should become a writer fr. The way you described everything helped me visualise a lot of it even with out context

Pretty pretty cool dude
SKATERB0Y
Pretty banger writing. I can imagine it in my head, and that’s sorta what you’re Anna go for when ya write. Prob better than what I could do too




‼️‼️‼️‼️ So pretty fire man
hehe thxxx >:33
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