Hiiiya (o´・ω・｀)ﾉto whoever is reading this if you don't want to reading my lil yap feel free to scroll down and see some good art and whoever is here for my pre yap welcome. So these are my cowboy ocs or girls I just call them as a collective cowboys idk if that wrong but we preveil. These cowboys have a long long convoluted lore butヽ(O_O )ﾉ I'm sure ya'll don't want' to read all of that. Plus this blog post would never end with my old man like stammering so here we are╰(⸝⸝⸝´꒳`⸝⸝⸝)╯! Imma be showing old and new redesign talk about why and what I change and how I feel about the pice and if I think I have imrpoved at all. SO LET'S START!!(｡•̀ᴗ-)✧

Wren

Old design 

This is wren before she had no name or much design to her I wanted a goth cowboy but was poorley excuted and tha page felt really empty. But I do like her looking down pose it was really good ngl and i'm jelly of that part still!! Overall the probelm I found I was having during this time was the paper in the sketch book itself so I didn't really like drawing in it so I gave up before even trying to fix it.-`д´-

New Design

This is Wrens new design I finally came up with a name and personality for her(つ≧▽≦)つand a little bit of story for her. I still wanted a goth cowboy so instead of makeup I went for clothes instead.（´･ω･｀o） I page isn't as empty and I could really shade and add a bit of color to the drawing.ο Though the looking down pose I tired to do again is a bit off I think I made the head to big but we live and learn! I doo think I really improve in her style and face but idk about the looking down pose could've done better. Maybe I'll fix it right after this idk(´༎ຶ ͜ʖ ༎ຶ `)♡

Lilith 

Old design

I do still really like this page I was trying to add chibis to these pages tho Idk what style of chibi I want to do or like. I didn't really do much for her outfit( ˘･з･) I wanted a kind of like show girl pagentry outfit but this one looks pretty plain. Though I can say again the posing is really nice and fluid (´∀｀)tho there isn't much story telling within her character herself a plain outfit and long hair you can baiscally put any personality and it'd fit. With most of the page full there where still a lot of empty space making it feel akward.（ ；¬＿¬) at least that's what I think

New design 

For this I really wanted to add more umpht I guess, but more like old pagentry clothing that goes within her story. Also her hooked nose is more noticeable before I feel like you couldn't really tell what kinda face he had even with a front veiw so that is a big imrpovement on that part. ALSO DAD BOD (!! ´◯`)∑so before she was mucelar. But not to hate I felt like that was a little too boring so I gave her that musclar dad bod idk if you can tell maybe in later drawing or redsigns I make it more noticeable though I did try to make her bigger compared to the others.(´つヮ⊂) Many ways I like how she look and her clothes are really nice and look like they would be some kind of pagentry but also used and a bit torn. So I feel like this one was a success as well.(´-ω-`)

Aden

Old design

okok I know this one is a bit.... bad. I mean no head on one body because it was too had for me to figure out how'd he looke there. and one stickynote,(¬_¬”) because I esared soo much there the paper started to reject my pencil line like huh what(╯°□°）╯. but besides that I like the one pose of him pulling off his pants... whoa (⁄ ⁄>⁄ ▽ ⁄<⁄ ⁄) besides the point but we can really see his face there and overall kind what want he is. Again with the clothes really pain you can't even tell what they are it was supposed to be a corset and shirt tho it falls a little flat. also his hat it so small wtf. it was hard to draw him because of his face I couldn't really gasp how'd he look so much I baiscally easer the paper off. tho I still really do like his concept but it could be more. also the empty space is crazy.(˃̣̣̥⌓˂̣̣̥ )

New design

CAN WE GIVE A APPLUAS FOR THE SIDE PROFLIEヾ(☆▽☆), I really love how I did it soo good chef's kiss. I try to make my side proflies really simple and so far I really like it（ʃƪ＾3＾ ）. I added more to his old concept like adding more detail to the corset ofc the boning and lace pannels add something to it(*≧∀≦*). Though everything else is pretty much the same. the hat is wayy bigger and I love it it's here to stay. the full body pose is a big akward tho it's fine and I feel like his face is consitant at least I think i didn't  need to redraw it 5 times. And ofc the paper is more full theres that too. Maybe I shoudl add full body freckles hmmm I'm thinking of more ideas to add to this. I always go back and add more I love them sm.←～（o ｀▽´ )oΨ

End yap

So did ya'll like them and my yaps inbetween I hope you did. well lmk what you think and if you think the new designs are better I love fedback if you have any to give(* ´∀｀*). I feel like the old design were so empty because that old sketch book was much bigger comparedΣ(-᷅_-᷄ ๑) to my current one tho, the design felt empty themselves too. So I'm glad they turned out better. Thank ya'll again for readin this maybe I'll post another art study I'm currently working on lmk if you'd like to see that bye bye now.┗(＾ 0 ＾)┓