Random story I wrote :)

THIS IS NOT A REAL STORY!!

Tell me what do ya'll think!! (about the story lol)

My name is Ines, I'm 17 years old, and I like going out at night and driving my dad's car, it's relaxing. Today, it's 1 am and I'm doing so. It's very dark, and I've been hearing some weird noises for a while now. I decided to go back home anf sleep, so I buckled up the belt and went home. When I got home, I went to my room very quietly. But when I got there... Someonen was there! I got very panicked and went to my parent's room. I astepped in and shaked my dad's arm nervously. When he waked up, he made a horrified expression. 

-W-WHO ARE YOU?!-He yelled- GET OUT OF MY HOUSE!

-B-but dad, its m-

My father threw me away from the door. I was terrified, so I went to the Police Department. 

-Alright, dear. I'm gonna help you, okay? What's your name?

-Ines... Ines Graves... - I said very nervous.

-Liar! There's no Ines Graves in the register!

That woaman kicked me out too. I was freaking out. I was walking to the bus stop woth a dissapointed face, when I saw a boy right there.

-They also didn't believe me...