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i read a poem on being a parent to a teenager before on an English textbook and tbh i found it kinda mean or harsh? but i got inspired by it about missing moments with your kid/teenager after they grew up!! i hope u enjoy reading the poem!! :D
My little baby,
such a cute little lady,
morning she helps me sweep,
night all she does is weep,
locked in her room,
i hear a calming tune,
my little baby,
used to share a tune with me,
now she's all grown,
i’m so alone,
oh how i miss her,
going to the beach in the summer,
riding her bike for the first time,
my little sunshine,
brights my days,
while i paint her nails,
i miss my little baby,
without her it's so lonely
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Hannah>:3
this is so freacking goodddd!!!! i luv it!
awwww tysmmm!!!! i enjoy writing poems so im glad u enjoyed reading itttt!!! :DDD
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This is so good :o i love the use of repetition and just the general way you used words here <3
tysmmmm <33 srry i hadnt seen this earlier but i really do enjoy adding repetition into my poems i feel like it makes the message or meaning stronger which i usually want for my poems! :D
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ShawShauxz
It's beautiful! I don't know much about poems but you totally rockin it. The way i can emphasize with the parent feelings by the reminiscing the little moments they have with they children. <3
awww tysmmnm!!! <33 ur comment rlly motivated mee!!! and tbh i find it kinda upsetting when i found the poem talking bad/negatives about their kid and wanted to write one focusing on the good and bad things but in a sweet way instead. im glad u liked the poem!!!
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