a poem i wrote!!

i read a poem on being a parent to a teenager before on an English textbook and tbh i found it kinda mean or harsh? but i got inspired by it about missing moments with your kid/teenager after they grew up!! i hope u enjoy reading the poem!! :D


My little baby,

such a cute little lady, 

morning she helps me sweep, 

night all she does is weep, 

locked in her room, 

i hear a calming tune, 

my little baby, 

used to share a tune with me,

now she's all grown, 

i’m so alone, 

oh how i miss her, 

going to the beach in the summer,
riding her bike for the first time, 

my little sunshine,

brights my days, 

while i paint her nails,

i miss my little baby, 

without her it's so lonely


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𒁇𒐕𐎠𒀼 ꩜ .ᐟ

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This is so good :o i love the use of repetition and just the general way you used words here <3


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ShawShauxz

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It's beautiful! I don't know much about poems but you totally rockin it. The way i can emphasize with the parent feelings by the reminiscing the little moments they have with they children. <3


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awww tysmmnm!!! <33 ur comment rlly motivated mee!!! and tbh i find it kinda upsetting when i found the poem talking bad/negatives about their kid and wanted to write one focusing on the good and bad things but in a sweet way instead. im glad u liked the poem!!!

by candy <3; ; Report