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Aliza grace

this is such a stupid rant but OMG it pisses me off

if y'all have the blessing of not knowing who Aliza grace is, then allow me to be the bearer of bad news and tell you who she is. 

aliza grace is a "poet" who has published multiple books which include heartsick, soul tie, and the female manipulater. her books are basically a collage of poems she has (poorly) written 


examples include the following: 

"shes all the thing

ill never be"


"you can miss him

without begging for him back 

you can cry for him

without going back to him"


if there's any poets reading this, you know that this is LAZY writing. I mean cmon, 4th grade me going through a depressive episode could write something better then this crap. and shes selling these? look, I'm not the best writer, but even I wouldn't sell something like this. this is the crap I'd write on my school bus in my notes app. 

before anyone says that "oh its ok cus she isn't doing any harm" shes contributing to the downfall of modern writing. shes literally the Colleen Hoover of poetry. and the grammar? I get that some writers choose bad grammar on purpose but this is not contributing to the poem at all. and you can tell that she clearly doesn't understand poetry considering that she writes a sentence and just puts parts of it on separate lines.

honestly if you write like that... you should not be publishing poems. 


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