the intro for my book thingy

ok so i just wanna know if this is lame or not. some thought questions:

does it make you cringe? is it good or bad cringe? is there something that you don't like and can't ignore? do you want more or less detail?

also, this isn't finished yet, i am actively writing more and adding to the story so this may change over time. if it's something major ill edit this. ok that's it read away.

Dear Diary,

Hello, my name is Daniel Smith. This is supposed to be a diary of sorts but I'm not sure what to write. I'll start with myself; obviously you know my name now, but my partner calls me Danny and our friends, Math and Daze, call me Holi. It's because my birthday is on Halloween so it's like Holiday but shorter. I think Math is the only person who has ever called me Holiday before. That was a very strange day. We can get to that later though.

My partner's name is Frankie. It's actually Aya, but Frankie is what they prefer. They use they/them pronouns, and I use he/him, or they/them it doesn't really matter. Anyways, Math told me to write some stuff down, seeing as we have all been through quite a bit. We will get to that later too though.

Math and Daze are friends that me and Frankie made at TBU. That's Two Birds University; we all went to college together which is how we met, I like to believe we would have met anyway though.

I want to go chronologically so I'll go way back, before everything happened, and when I first met Math, Daze, and Frankie. This technically wasn't an actual entry just like an intro to my first entry.

Ok, that's it. if you got this far, thank you I appreciate it. let me know what you think. If you don't know what to say, refer to my thought questions at the beginning:)