2. Body and Soul

These tired eyes search this Earth for truth, this weary soul hears only but pained lies. This wary mind sees through your masks, wanting only to speak to the soul; This hand writes only to ask that you see what I do. This worn body trudges through this river styx in search of what was not meant for me; Justice truly is all I have left.

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But do I mind?


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5undays

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Another absolute wondrous piece by Morty. This one resonates within my soul, especially the mask part. I can feel the undertones of curiosity and understanding, but I also feel that tinge of pain as per the piece. Really, really beautiful job.


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thank you so much! im not sure if i can properly convey how much your words mean. i never thought my writing could get such an incredible response. i was always on the fence about being a writer but you've convinced me.

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one more post! (i couldn't resist but i really should sleep, i have school tomorrow LOL)

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Again, you don’t need to thank me, it’s my absolute pleasure. Seeing you spew your creativity and post your pieces makes me feel happier than I’d ever be capable of expressing. I hope you know that you’ve got a talent for writing and I will enjoy your pieces as they come. May you continue to write for as long as you live.

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I can't wait to see it. I need to carry myself to bed soon here, but I hope school treats you well tomorrow. Thank you for publishing your pieces.

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