If I wrote midwest emo song (probably sucks)

If I only have ability to sing so whiney like empire! Empire anyway here's a song I wrote and it's called "our hearts is like tin can telephone":

"Everytime I sleep...Dream about you being here...hold me tight until we can feel our heart to heart moment in sunflower fields...we're spinning around and around while laughing until I woke up...you're not here but my heart getting connected to you somewhere..I'll find you until our hearts are pieces together....my dearest soulmate" 

Anyway that what I got so ik it's dumb  and probably worst song haha