Trash writing!(writing dump, I'm trying to get familiar here)

Hey, Zakai here, i just wanted to show off some writing of mine and maybe get others opinions on it? Perhaps ill turn this into an account for my writing journey. Lets just get to the point of showing my first piece though, a little horror story. My apologies if it suckss

Dark hole of night.

Echoing laughing, giggles as loud as trains. Miss Lily Ma’am ran in front of me. She was no adult, rather a small child like me. After a long night of trick or treating in our cute Halloween costumes we have decided to play tag. Better than outside, in storming rain. We must play inside her house; thunder could be heard from close around. The stomps of our feet were louder though. One step after the other followed with laughter. I was right behind, reaching my arms out like a zombie. The dark hallway, covered in candles lit. Brighten my view as well as hers. What should be to worry? And Halloween was supposed to be scary. No, it was fun.

“Hang on Miss Lily Ma’am! My dress is tripping my foot!” I would say inside a giggle. It wasn’t a lie as the rim got stuck under the marry janes upon my feet.

“You better get to grabbing that dress up then” I got in response from her. Her voice was much softer, almost muffled. I joked it was perfect for Halloween night.

“You bet I will” I say confidently, picking up my dress

Lucky enough in time before she took a sharp turn. Up and down the stairs we have been. This time it was down again. The sound of clacking on the wood, so slippery perhaps I would have slipped. But my eyes stay firm on her back. This whole time I had my eyes on her back.

Taking small steps off the stairs into a large room. Where the main door was placed, they called it the living room. They had a hundred other ones too! Miss Lily Ma’am took a stop in front of me. So suddenly I slip on the shiny new polished floors. No candles to light the mopey dark room. I cackled out and looked up.

“Did you see that! Did I look silly?!” But the only thing that met my eyes was darkness.

Miss Lily Ma’am had skin, bones, and hair. Though the mask she wore had the smile of an angel on it. It was replaced by complete darkness.