So honestly i love writing and i have been writing for a while i usually do poetry and what not cuz to me personally its so fun but as of lately i have had no motivation to write and it makes me like supa saddd :(( like i genuinely havent had any motivation to write AT ALL!!! but anyway im not necessarily good at writing hut i have had a few ppl say when they read my poems they cry cuz i post them on my insta!!! so i think i wanna post one here and get a public opinion and maybe some tips on how i can improve so magbe thatll give me sum motivation on writing!!
Misery Loves Company
Misery was once so beautiful finding comfort in being alone forcing herself into the hidings of her own problems
as company came around he placed himself next to her promising he could save her from herself
she wrapped her arms and all her unhealthy habits around him forcing him to become just like her
her love suffocating until he disintegrated only feeding her misery more
reminiscent of a broken lover
until more company came around promising the same thing telling her they could free her from herself
she fears she will never feel love she will never understand how to go on
but poor misery loves company
this is less of a poem more of a story ig?? but idek i feel like its so bad i did post this one on my insta so if u do wanna go check it out my insta issss @yourmusicgirlfriend i follow back i swear!!!
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Chaos Conspiracies
its not bad bad but as a poem maybe try making it rhyme? or make it a bit shorter as it is a bit long for a poem least 2 me but i like the topic
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thank yeww!!!
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itll be soo cool as a hycoo idk how 2 spell it but its a short poem
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