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plz help wit meh poetry dilemma ;-;

So honestly i love writing and i have been writing for a while i usually do poetry and what not cuz to me personally its so fun but as of lately i have had no motivation to write and it makes me like supa saddd :(( like i genuinely havent had any motivation to write  AT ALL!!! but anyway im not necessarily good at writing hut i have had a few ppl say when they read my poems they cry  cuz i post them on my insta!!! so i think i wanna post  one here and get a public opinion and maybe some tips on how i can improve  so magbe thatll give me sum motivation on  writing!!


Misery Loves Company 

Misery was once so beautiful finding comfort in being alone forcing herself into the hidings of her own problems

 as company came around he placed himself next to her promising he could save her from herself  

she wrapped her arms and all her unhealthy habits around him forcing him to become just like her

her love suffocating  until he disintegrated only feeding her misery more

reminiscent of a broken lover

until more company came around promising the same thing telling her they could free her from herself

she fears she will never feel love she will never understand how to go on

but poor misery loves company 


this is less of a poem more of a story ig?? but idek i feel like its so bad  i did post this one on my insta so if u do wanna go check it out my insta issss @yourmusicgirlfriend i follow back i swear!!!


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Chaos Conspiracies

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its not bad bad but as a poem maybe try making it rhyme? or make it a bit shorter as it is a bit long for a poem least 2 me but i like the topic


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thank yeww!!!

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itll be soo cool as a hycoo idk how 2 spell it but its a short poem

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