it isnt to glorify terrorism or such obviously, but my story is about my main character sniping the president of venezuela ( not telling the real name in the story for reasons) and a terrorist organization asked him to join,.. etc.. its actually kinda off of place and stuff...
but is this acceptable? if it is, can you get me some ideas on how to end them?? and if not, can y'all please give me some other "criminal organization" ideas??
honestly a cartel is a little boring to me im sorry
Im done with the lore and plot already...
this story is actually based off colombia and venezuela (the character is venezuelan and moves to colombia) and im too attached to those countries so i cant change them or else id lose interest on my story
plus this is a story for a shooter game (lmfao)
this is what i wrote: (simplified ver)
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describe in once sentence:
a government problem in Venezuela starts an anarchist revolution, which gets out of place.
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lore:
Im thinking to make the problem in Venezuela because Venezuela already has the problem
I dont know about the politics in Colombia tho
in this story, in 2014/2015, Oscar votes for the opposition of the president who supports dictatorship. (wow) his name could be "mad" cause real people aint allowed
this is too controversial...
eh... i can do whatever i want... i guess...
but mad got reelected again.
since then, Oscar fled to Cucuta, where he met sofia. then, he moved to department 2, (Antioquia, Medellin). Oscar was working as a bus driver, yeah yeah, and got sent an invite to ave, a terrorist organization for the revolution.
now Oscar actually cares about politics buh, he fled to Colombia to just get out of the situation and forget everything about what happened there. he wasn't medicated for schizophrenia either, nor he ever knew he had it, until symptoms got worse... etc.
yall... dep2 is real... i dont think i should be typing no more.... /j
(dep2 is the story name)
so like
the popularity w ave got higher, like yknow people of all ages can participate in it, and it gives big money.
so in 2018(thinking to make it the same day maduro was almost executed, search that up.) Oscar snipes mad, and hit the target.
Oscar is now being tracked down, (but they dont know it's him tho)
after the president has been shot, ave (excluding cat, Oscar and etc.) did not stop, they did not want a government forever. they took over Venezuela and is now targetting Colombia, Ecuador, and so on. Parts of Guyana have been informed about AVE because of this.
writing question: Can I write a story about terrorism?
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mochi! 🔆
Hey!! I'm interested! (Mostly cuz I'm Venezuelan xD)
I don't know where are you publishing it but I'm looking for it!! (☆ . ☆)
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Woah I didn't know you'd actually like it I thought I would get jumped
by KAMI!; ; Report
Nono, it's okay!! Tbh I kinda wanted to make a game with something similar
It was supposed to be a game where we can play as multiple characters and change their lifes, depending on which ending some character gets, it might change the ending of other character
Problem is: I can't do that, I don't know how to code and even if I had a team, I think it would be too complicated for us lol
The game would be situated here and one of the playable characters was supposed to be a dude who was planning to do a revolution lol so depending on your choices he might or might not do it lol
I would need more history research to do that too lol I'm a bit of a blockhead xD
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i dont really think its that complicated
you mean like trying to code it up or writing it??
if we have to write it and plan id like it think of it like a tree and its branches
by KAMI!; ; Report
i dont really think that game idea is that complicated
you mean like trying to code it up or writing it??
if we have to write it and plan id like it think of it like a tree and its branches
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DustZ
you have freedom over your mind you have freedom over the art you create don't ask if it's acceptable that is the soul killer
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KAMI!
i was scared to say this on reddit and etc cause i know ill get attacked i think
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