poems ..

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I've been interested in poetry for a while now but I am NOT good at writing poems :') here are some poems I've written, please tell me if theres anything I can do to improve my writing !

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I watched him as he cut off pieces of flesh from my body to then swallow them, he kept swallowing and cutting
I told myself 'he hasnt eaten, hes starving' as I felt the pain through my entire body
He swallowed the last piece of flesh, pulling away to wipe his mouth
Patiently i waited for him, thinking he was gonna stop the bleeding
Though, all I did was wait and wait
Because he never did it.

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I felt complete laying there, the smell of blood invading my body aswell as staining it, his body was still while it began to feel cooler
I felt complete being inside of him like I'd always dreamed of, though it felt better
I held the knife to my throat, satisfaction running through my body
His ribcage was like feeling death at my fingertips, and i pressed down the knife, letting the sharp blade glide over my skin as it opened
The pain was the most terribly wonderful experience,
I soon fell into the deepest sleep any human could experience, though it was inside my one and only love.