Trying to mimic JP art style!! Give me tips & suggestions (•◡•) /

. ݁₊ ⊹ . ݁ ⟡ ݁ . ⊹ ₊ ݁. I haven't finished the full drawing yet! I've only done the sketch and have a rough idea of what the lineart will look like. I also have colors in mind that I applied to the last image.

. ݁₊ ⊹ . ݁ ⟡ ݁ . ⊹ ₊ ݁. Please give me suggestions for anything I can improve! (coloring, shading, lighting, anatomy, technique, etc...)