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im gonna start posting chapters of a short story I'm writing. it does contain some slight gore but its not the main focus of the story. I want it to be a dark romance. but don't go thinking I'm gonna write SA and freaky shit like that. its just a story dealing with scary super natural things. Non human x human stuffs :3 ummmmm bye :D
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Noble Jelly
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(sorry if its a lil long :P) but in the story there are three species.
| Humans type (a) and non-humans type (b)| Non humans are flesh eating being's that have evolved to look and act exactly like humans. they have developed complex emotions and relationships with each other and humans.
most people think they are legends but 20 percent of the human population are non humans and they are slowly growing in size.
Non humans have two types
B1) they don't need to solely rely on human flesh to live and can just live off of blood. they are closest to humans and blend into society the best. (they can have jobs around blood and flesh and they control themselves the best)When these creatures are born they are born with no teeth like normal babies. The only difference is they need a small amount of blood every once in a while and they grow most their teeth around 6 months.They have slightly better senses than human but for the most part they are nearly identical to humans. They are what people call vampires. The only difference is they aren't supernatural. Most people who encounter one don't live to speak about them. Most of the vampire urban legends are made up by these creatures.
B2) they need human flesh to survive. Blood can hold them over for a few day's but it only makes them hungrier.They can somewhat control themselves around blood if they are trained by their parents or someone close to them. Their senses are heightened and they can move faster than humans. In cases when they smell blood they cant control themselves. Most remove themselves from the room or area to not draw attention while some cant control themselves and have to have a taste( they will use force )
b3) be three are the rare cases unlike the others. This type are born with teeth and crave flesh around three months. in most cases when they are born they eat their way out of the womb. no mother has survived this type. They are depraved people who will hunt anyone down even each other's there isn't much known about them because the government has done all they can to kill them off.
all kinds of species humans and non humans can give birth to non humans. but in most cases it is random. You cant really choose to have a human or non humans its like flipping a coin.
(I can explain more of the plot if u like :3 I apologize if my spelling or Grammar isn't the best )
by ꒰‧₊len!?⊹꒱; ; Report
Thanks, will be tuning in, a bit confusing how the wider population ignores 20% of cannibals but still interesting nonetheless.
by Noble Jelly; ; Report
thx I'm still tweeking the story a bit it was nice to see someone elses opinion on it (: have a great day man <3
by ꒰‧₊len!?⊹꒱; ; Report