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Decompose By Me (Starstruck)
[Verse 1]
You walk away like a fox after day,
Stepping down on those rocks in the way.
I'm hoping you glance back to me
Realizing your love’s the key
[Chorus]
As I look to the sky full of stars, (full of stars)
I wonder why that love ain’t ours.
Choking on all my words. (on my words)
You’ve hit too many of my nerves.
Now I’ve started to decompose (decompose)
What would you propose?
[Verse 2]
“Love me till I decay”
That's all I wanted you to say.
I'm waiting for you to choose
That i’m the one for you too
[Chorus]
As I look to the sky full of stars, (full of stars)
I wonder why that love ain’t ours.
Choking on all my words. (on my words)
You’ve hit too many of my nerves.
Now I’ve started to decompose (decompose)
What would you propose?
[Outro thing??]
I, I, I love you.
Let me love you
Please, let me
Let me propose
Before I decompose
Notes: i have no clue how like... making music works so its not gonna be the best thing it the world, i just wanted to turn some of my poetry into a song :3 (and i know people probably won't do this but hey, better be safe than sorry, PLEASE DO NOT TAKE MY WORK- I WILL CRY ABT IT)
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lucas
Sounds awesome :> if u ever make the full song pls lmk I really wanna hear it /)
Fromunderthecorkffi
I think it's rlly cool!! Lmk if you ever release it ^^
vera :1
URTGHGHEAJDSHJA ITS SO KEWL!!! ^_^ i think u should add a bridge at some point in the song it might enhance the awesomeness
*★,°*:.☆.★* 。LIMONN x33 !!!
IT'S VERY GOOD ^_^ !!! I think it would sound very good with a melody, TELL ME WHEN YOU DO IT x333!!!
liver muncher
i think after verse 2 you should do like a bridge thing i think its called, overall i really like it if you ever produce it id definitely listen to it!!!