Today I cant do much
I cant eat
I cant drink
I cant think
I cant live the life i was meant to live
Let me go!
Let me go!
Is the same song I'll sing
To make it less painful
To be a human being
And what will I get?
The fears, the tears, the sweat
Sometimes I crawl
In the deep shamefull pit of myself
Watching as others are sweet in the sunlight
And I'm alone, dying in this pit of shame
Silence in the pit
Silent pain in my heart
Let me go!
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Alecu/Al⚝
this is a really nice poem! the lines where there are no rhymes really makes it feel more dense, something like the feeling of pain; yet the language is simple and straightforward, making it easy to feel through. good job, keep it up!
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Thank you I appreciate it! I'm still kinda new 2 poetry but I'm getting there ^_^
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