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song and lyrics idea 6/12/24

(7/4)

bills piling at the door

old building air to breathe in

driving on overpasses

insect infestation


smells like the plasticizer

impulsive population

status staring through me

loss of their attention


(4/4)

you are inadequate

lost future's gone to shit

you won't remember this

you are inadequate


you are inadequate

lost future's gone to shit

you won't remember this

you are inadequate


(my smoke bleeds) 

(dog coughing)

(stay with me) 

(philosophy)


(7/4)

poisoned chalice waiting

creaking floor perceive me

smog in my lungs collapses

weaker than yesterday


sanguine metal lurching

her smile hiding something

eyes born in the morning

deep pit full of needles


(4/4)

you are inadequate

lost future's gone to shit

try to remember this

you are inadequate


you are inadequate

lost future's gone to shit

try to remember this

you are inadequate


(my smoke bleeds) 

(they're watching) 

(my lack of) 

(subtlety)

(my smoke bleeds) 

(dog coughing)

(dog coughing)


(7/4)

bodies joining shadows

fell asleep to die real slowly

children now endangered

cold sad xenophobes


(4/4)

you are inadequate

lost future's gone to shit

try to remember this

you are inadequate


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Seriously great lyric!! Sounds very metal to me. Well done.


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i really appreciate the kudos, and the kind words, friend. definitely a more progressive metal or hardcore sort of vibe i was going for. more melodic during the verses and then just rocking the fuck out during the chorus!

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