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my body is melting into the floor.
maybe i'll seep through and transform into nothing,
or earth, isn't that where we all begin and end?
(i hope to become something beautiful.)
red fades into pink fades into white-grey-beige.
i want to but i don't, hands reach but i am motionless
sinking into the path i paved for myself,
soaked into the cracks of the concrete
a grimy, ugly f*cking pit
pulsing and bleeding and pouring helplessly into myself
crawling deep into my rotting shell again
decaying of my own volition,
at the torturous mercy of my own two hands
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GigiDarlingg
Omogish this is so pretty and beautiful fr u gotta write a song with this u have talent it's soooo good!!1!
thank u so much! i cant lie the only songs i've written were songs about foods when i was 15 (srsly i wrote a rap about mac & cheese)
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Awws that's so cute but creative! Love that for ya <3
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FRAN[KIE]
i really enjoy ur words :3 post more poetry STAT
i admire ur writing a lot so i really appreciate this coming from u!! ^-^
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jay
this was really expressive. pls don't stop writing, as you're seriously good at it imo :)
this is one of the best compliments i've ever been given and it means a lot, thank you!
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Anna :)
:0 dude i had known you liked writing poetry type stuff but damn this is like crazy. i would buy a book of just little snippets of your thoughts honestly
ANNA <3 that actually means so much to me, i was kinda nervous for u to see it honestly!!!!
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NERVOUS?! NO!! dude this is dang on beautiful!!! it’s so well written and personal and raw and i think it’s perfectly you.
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Skol
damn this is really good
!!!! thank you so much <3
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birby (autoplay)
i like it. should pick up poetry /gen
thank you!!! :] i appreciate that a lot!
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bandit !!
(note: this is extremely personal, i wrote it in 2022 while lying on the bathroom floor, i know its kind of graphic, please be nice abt it askdjfdnkgml ok bye)