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Coil chapter 24

AHHH omgomg like i forgot to write this but omg i have to talk abt it because like HELLO WHAT ?! i am writing this on my laptop that has like 5 keys missing and the screen is falling off so it may have a bit of errors but im just so excited i had to share


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like i was at a friends house sleeping over and i was checking because it was Wednesday and i screamed because i didn't think there would be a chapter yet. like i ran to her room because we were sleeping in the living room and i like started reading it and omggg. first when he casted the spell to burn it up i was like woahhhh because when he first met egg it was only like a little flame and such and like ahh hes growing so much im so proud of him. and then when they all got out i was like yayayay because i really have been wanting to see more of the teachers and this really showed how the author is making like them and even adults scared of a child. When the dazai protection squad were talking my heart melted sm like omg SHE WNATED TO ADOUPT HIMLIEK HAHHDJHDJ i sobbed because like my heart aug and then when she was like trying to get them to hold off because we all know that none of the teachers will actually give him the help he needs. and like right when dazai was in there i knew something was going on because in chapter 23 i was thinking about ways he could get rid of her because like he couldn't without getting in trouble because of his reputation and then in this chapter seeing that his hand was ungloved i put together the pieces and like when it said his arm was bleeding i knew what he was trying to do because i was so excited about the new chapter that i watched all of the harry potter movies (coil and m&m is way better tbh) and then i just got to like read with my jaw dropped. this was like the best way he could have done it because he has the demon student stuff going around so he cant do it in a normal way because even if it wasn't him the blame would fall on him. The fact that Snape knows about his habits will give him another alibi (besides his arm being evidence too) and the fact that the professors knows what is going around helps. even though he hates to use his habits as a way this was perfect because while he likes having the bad rumors, this adds a bit of innocence to his bad character and the teachers may allow more stuff. This was like so well thought through and i love it so much, like the thought going into this fanfic is so amazing and i just love it so much because i can think into like so much of it and since it isn't following plot exactly i can come up with stuff and like AHHHH. i wish i could write well because i really want to make good stuff like that. i wish i could write more but this computer is driving me insane i cant type anymore 

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