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Mistakes

Do you ever made a mistake that can ruin your life?

We all have done that...


     Mistakes is a common thing for us living beings, we're surrounded by decisions we have to decide. Freedom is what causes us to decide. Yet there are consequences to the things you chose and whom not to chose. 

     Once you're stuck on a maze you have to decide whether you should go left or right? One may become a problem, one may become a solution. You need to face the sun to not see your shadow. What you settle explains a thing about you. 


     And if you had already done what's wrong, there's an opportunity to do it right, just like the maze. We learn the best from our mistakes, it's our mistake to do it again.


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this is really good but I think it could use some work better connecting your thought processes from one line to the other. you give statements like "you have to face the sun to not see your shadow" but I wanna know more about what the shadow represents together with the other statements


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