totally new song idea

guys i have a new song idea. im just saying, we open on like a shit ton of drums, and the guitar is going like myeew dun dun dun dun myeeew dun dun dun dun myeew, and kinda have that repeat a bunch. at this point the drummers going ham on the drums, and then the singer screams like "YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH" and we get the dj going like wehwoo WEEE wehwoo WEE. and then the lyrics will go like "Chaos, it's just the beginning Every promise I made I'm rescinding Center mass in the middle of the monster I'm getting tired of drowning the constant Cry for help it's debatable The only reason that you love me is I'm hated by all Come on, come see dysfunction I guess we're gonna leave it open for discussion'' and then later on we go to this bridge, the guitar is going like dundundundundundunndundund and the drums are going like tuntuntuntuntuntuntuntuntuntun, then the bridge ends with the singer saying "today i say goodbye, goodbye" and then the chorus goes like "Oh I didn't need to leave to stay right here Today, I said goodbye, goodbye Oh I didn't need to leave to stay right here Today, I said goodbye, goodbye Oh I didn't need to leave to stay right here Today, I said goodbye, goodbye Oh I didn't need to leave to stay right here Today I said goodbye"

anyway rate my amazing song i came up with.