Big Dilemma [UPDATE]

Okay, so I've started planning out the essay using one of the ideas I got off the comments from my last blog post...And it's going really well! I decided to make my statement for the thesis essay 

" Acts of heroism can 100% be taken for granted, no matter what the weight of the situation is."

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I think it's hopefully going to get me a good grade this time around. I've passed the previous essays and I actually got help from friends this time, but I'm trying to use it alone...It's going a lot better when I do it on my own.