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01/28/2024
SHE HAS NO MOTHER FIGURE AND THAT TO CAPE COD AND THE QUIET SEA WAVES ARE NOW THAT FOR HER. "I love you, but you don't understand me," SHE SAID TO THE TALL 7-FOOT MAN HIDDEN BENEATH THE TALL FEILDS OF LAVENDER, HE LOOKED DOWN AT HER AS IF HE WAS A DOG AND SHE WAS HIS BONE, THIS MADE HER UNCOMFERTABLE, BUT AS SOON SHE HEARD HIM MOAN AND GRUNT AS HIS LEGS AND BODY MELTED INTO THE SAND BENTETH THEM, SHE FELT PEACE. IT SOON SUNK IN THAT IT WAS JUST HER AND HER QUIET FIELD OF TALL LAVENDER.
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paoupaou
It has soul, but since you don't use rhyme why not try to turn it into a story or novella? Writing is therapeutic. Do you read any books or writers that inspire your writing style and process?
(created a profile just to write that lol)